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Chrissianne
Chrissianne
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Poem

Secret  Valentine To Cleve

To Cleve from the Ladies under the tree!

  
*•-:¦:-•:*'' ♥  ''*:•-:¦:-•*

On this Valentine occasion
we ladies need no invitation
 
To show our deep appreciation
for a man of strength and dedication 
 
So I've made this loving compilation
to let you know of our desperation

 For you we have such admiration
so we all line up for the duration
 
With fondness and such admiration
 and offer without  hesitation
 
This testament to our emotion  
 to demonstrate our real affection

Hugs and kisses and deep appreciation
for all your sweet love and your dedication

You're  kind and caring, a great inspiration  
the most dearest  friend in our estimation

To show our friend our true devotion
we send this note of sweet affection

 A candy box full with admiration
(the candy's gone...due to temptation...)


*•-:¦:-•:*'' ♥  ''*:•-:¦:-•*
 

With your pure heart's love and reflection
from your loving communications
 
To your daily poem submissions
that arouse so much anticipation
 
 Your poems inspire with mind stimulation
your heart resounds with loves' vibration
 
To the tree we admire your dedication
you hold us in utmost fascination
 
Your work gives us gratification
 it brings a smile of jubilation

Like the sunset o'er the deepest ocean
that glows with friendship's deep devotion

We love your word creations
Missing you is an aggravation

 All have hoped for alleviation
of ailments causing consternation
 
So, we make this Proclamation
and send this in anticipation

Your return will cause a huge sensation
so, if you  have an inclination

We could share in jubilation
to our dear Cleve's reconnection

*•-:¦:-•:*'' ♥  ''*:•-:¦:-•*


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By Chrissianne

Author's Comments:
I asked all the ladies under the tree to supply a line for this poem.  Some sent more than one and I was happy to use as many as could fit.   I have used editorial powers here and there to make the metre better but have not changed the heartfelt meaning of any of the lines given to me.  I hope you enjoy this Cleve!!

Poetesses listed here in order of appearance:

joeysgirl1 (Pat) and leannefnt (Leanne)
Mollie and Leanne
Chrissianne and Dickson (WJ/Wilma)
janmp (Janice) and Pat
Sue and Leanne
Chrissianne and Gabrielle
Dee twice!
Dee twice again!
maggie (Ruth) and #1Sue (Sue)
Prairie (Amanda) twice!
Whimsical One and Gabrielle
Gabrielle twice!
aliciag (Nancy) and Leanne
Debra (Debi) and grandneim (Grace)
Janice and Char
Chrissianne and Catmor (Cathy)
dahmon (Benita) and WJ
scarlettdreams. (Dani) twice!
Gabrielle and Char
kgcummings (Kathy) and Grace
Dani twice!


From the author's book: A nice cup of tea and a bit of me....
Chapter: Current Events
Poem first accepted for publication on Feb 13 2010

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Reviews and Diamond Ratings for this poem

What a fantastic idea to get all you sweethearts to write this wonderful tribute between you. And I am certain  Cleve is going to be tickled ...

Reviewed by John Henry

A wonderful idea with smashing results my fair poetess! The sentiments and well-wishings for Cleve have been amazing. One can't help but believe that ...

Reviewed by ChristopherSea

A very thoughtful Valentine, Chrissianne, for one of The Poet's Tree's most active members. You certainly put allot of work into this and I'm pleased ...

Reviewed by Prairie

LOL I was nearly off again with the tears lol...Cleve is so going to love from this Chrissie and it was a wonderful idea of yours to make th ...

Reviewed by Dee

I think I had a brain contractionWhen I should have jumped into actionSomehow I had lost all my tractionWith my tread worn down to a fractionThou ...

Reviewed by Juvie

There is a great deal of work here that you have painstakingly done. I am proud of you and I know Cleve will be thrilled to bits..Thank you Chrissi.Mu ...

Reviewed by Mollie

Somehow I missed this...so glad I found it today. It turned out great and I know Cleve will love it. xox Hugs Benita ...

Reviewed by dahmom

Wonderful job Chrissi...this had to have been a heep of work.....and it did turn out to be a special Valentine for Cleve...he will cherish it for ever ...

Reviewed by joeysgirl1

 What an original idea this is Chrissianne! - I had no idea that there are so many words ending in "ion"!This has been well thought out and has b ...

Reviewed by Maggie

I knew you had your work cut out for you when you decided to take this task on!! You did a wonderful work with the lines that we gave you and yours to ...

Reviewed by Janmp

What a master piece Chrissianne. I love it. I think you have missed your calling. You should be  Editor and Cheif somewhere. :) I just can't ...

Reviewed by Dickson on Feb 13 2010


Chrissianne, this is absolutely wonderful!  You did a fantastic job taking the lines given you and making something very special out of them for ...

Reviewed by Debra

You did a great job Chrissie  i know how Cleve likes to mess around with words he'll get a big kick out of this one.I'm sorry i missed the deadli ...

Reviewed by Aki

A great job you have done incorrelating all those lines of dedication. The list of poets donating reads like a film title. Am sure Cleve will more tha ...

Reviewed by bond007

This is really nice Chrissi.  I know Cleve will be more than thrilled with this.  The fact that so many of his friends contributed to it rea ...

Reviewed by W. E. Mitchell

You will have the poor old fellow back in there again in no time flat if he is going to get all this attention.. actually, I might go and jo ...

Reviewed by Lonelyriver on Feb 13 2010


Well hopefully this will bring wonderful and much needed cheer for Cleve.  You have done a lovely job of conbining everyone's contributions. Well ...

Reviewed by Scarlettdreams.
 
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