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Joebirdies
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Poem

In The Dark


While suffering continues

one has to wonder where

the TV cameras went to

that made us all aware.

Mass graves are still abundant

and Haitians want to know

while people die in silence

where did the whole world go.


We went to Massachusetts,

a Senate race was held

where voters pulled the levers in

the ways they were compelled.

That overrides starvation

that happens in the streets

of Haiti where so many are

still living under sheets.


We also had a snow storm

that kept us keyed for days,

we’re not real fond of weather

that interrupts our ways.

Schools were closed and we were forced

to cancel some events;

which overshadows people who

are waiting to get tents.


Some of us went on to sports,

the Super Bowl was played;

New Orleans won so now we had

to have a big parade.

The tickets cost an awful lot,

but gave us priceless times;

enjoyment gets our dollars while

the needy get our dimes.


You see the truth is we’ve moved on,

there’s many things at stake;

we watched reality too long

and now we need a break.

You’ll struggle with your hurricanes

while we go to the park;

our cameras will be over here

while you are in the dark.



By Joebirdies

Author's Comments:

From the author's book: Pieces of Existence
Chapter: Current Events
Poem first accepted for publication on Feb 10 2010

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Reviews and Diamond Ratings for this poem

A very powerful and meaningful message in this work.  Great rhythm and rhyme and excellent flow to the poem.  Yes, Massachusetts sure did pu ...

Reviewed by Susanne M. Psyris

We Americans are afforded so many LUXURIES while many in the world could not begin to comprehend what we have. Thank you for this wake up call,...&nbs ...

Reviewed by ILaurenLoves1

Unfortunately, this sad fact is a result of the media catering to the sorry attention span of the public rather than some nefarious intention on ...

Reviewed by Juvie

Joe, I'm glad I'm finally able to read your poem. My favorite lines...enjoyment gets our dollars while the needy get our dimes. Raw, sad truth there J ...

Reviewed by dahmom

Ouch!! You have really hit it where it hurts here Joe.  I was thinking the same thing, the news reporters have forgotten about the suffering whic ...

Reviewed by Chrissianne

Oh Joe, you have described human nature so well in this thought provoking piece.  So often we seeboth what we want to see, and also wha ...

Reviewed by Maggie

SHOOTING STRAIGHT FROM THE HIP, JOE! HOW TRUE THAT THE PROFOUNDLY IMPORTANT THINGS ARE SHOVED UNDERNEATH THE RUG MOST OF THE TIME, AS T ...

Reviewed by Char

hello joe, yet another priceless write that tells the tale of sorrow that we let slide between the sheets and remain hidden where we choose not to see ...

Reviewed by s7716

Well made points of the cold naked truth Poet!  Camera images are fleeting and their stories temporal when it comes to the News. You have a ...

Reviewed by ChristopherSea

I too agree with the others, you have made some valid points that we often make these not so wise choices. It is too easy to forget when you are not t ...

Reviewed by Janmp

W ell, I can't honestly say I want to see any more pictures of the suffering but that doesn't mean I have forgotten.. I am doing what I can to help an ...

Reviewed by Mollie

It is so difficult to find news that isn't ratings based.  I long ago quit watching the news for that very reason.  So much of it is garbage ...

Reviewed by Scarlettdreams.

Amazing work again Joe and from the stark truth of it all....your imagery paints the picture clearly..after they have their pictures and&nbs ...

Reviewed by Dee

Oh how I relate to this!  I worked for a television station for eleven and a half years.  I was the Human Resource Manager, could have never ...

Reviewed by Debra

I second Debra's review---she got it right the public has seen  all they want to see and have now gone back to the novelty of watc ...

Reviewed by Aki
 
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