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CDEEDS
CDEEDS
THIS IS ALL NEW FOR I NEVER CHANGED IT
BEFORE NOW. WITH THINGS MOVING ALONG
AS THEY ARE AND THAT I HAVE FINALLY
GAINED ENOUGH STRENGTH TO WORK A LITTL... More

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Poem

LOVE ALONG THE WAY



It is only now, I can see into your heart
There the main pump of life in perfect rythm

And now I am high as if drinking the spirits
There we dance the night away laughing and smiling

In my heart, you're welcome to linger you see
For it is a safe place where you'll find me

So search to your hearts content
The only place where love is spent

To feel the love so grand and bold
Where the heart will never grow cold

A place where you will choose to remain
Where there's only love to gain

So visit there and stay a little while
And when you leave, you'll be wearing a smile

There the peace will always be for you
And if you decide, you and I can make two

You know that i'm asking you to stay
You have found love along the way


by CDEEDS@, 11-22-2009, ALL RIGHTS RESERVED



By CDEEDS

Author's Comments:
A POEM INSPIRED BY THIS FRIEND. I WROTE SOME WORDS AND SHE PRESENTED THEM IN AN ORDER OF POETIC REVERANCE. BLESSINGS TO ALL AND HAVE A GREAT EVENING.........CLEVE.

From the author's book: A POETIC ADVENTURE FOR EVERYONE
Chapter: Relationships
Poem first accepted for publication on Nov 22 2009

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Reviews and Diamond Ratings for this poem

A very light-hearted and enjoyable love poem.  Your couplets are good and it's a very smooth and pleasant read.  I like the sentiment of the ...

Reviewed by Susanne M. Psyris

Revealing and tender in many ways Cleve. I especially like the second line. A beautiful thought. Congruence of life and the simultaneous empathy. Than ...

Reviewed by callednow

These words of love, warmth and tenderness are so wonderfully expressed that they show the poet's loving heart so well. Very warm and enjoyable. ...

Reviewed by Nicollette

Good eveninf Cleve, had a moment to come by and was so pleased to see you writing and back again, I love this one and you seem so inspired tou ignite ...

Reviewed by s7716

Cleve, first let me say that my Hope is that you are feeling better.  This work is eloquently elegant, touching and reaching out; truly from the ...

Reviewed by Sir Poet

Wonderfully warm and filled with love and caring. I so enjoy your works and have missed reading them while being gone way too long. God Bless! SMILES! ...

Reviewed by writerdreams

VERY NICELY DONE. THE WORDS BRING THE READER IN CLOSE AND WARM. THE THOUGHTS ARE EXPRESSED CLEARLY AND WITH LOVE. NICELY TITLED AND MUCH ENJOYED! ...

Reviewed by #1Sue

What a beautiful poem of love Cleve.  Written with lovely thoughts and dreams. Love and peace to you dear friend. I do hope your better. Blessing ...

Reviewed by Dickson

Cleve, your words show us that tender loving heart of yours. You sure know how to write about love!!! Pure joy to read. Hugs xox Benita ...

Reviewed by dahmom

I second my Mum here Cleve - you are really good at this type of poem - it is the stuff straight out of your heart which is the best....I wish it had ...

Reviewed by Chrissianne

A very beautiful poem Cleve, You are very good at couplets and I think it is  'your thing' ' where some excel at other forms...Very lovely to rea ...

Reviewed by Mollie

Totally lovely Cleve. How you bring back memories of the first days of relationships that eventually turn into lives. That was just a great read my fr ...

Reviewed by Joebirdies

 Loverly, my friend. This has such great emotions and imagery to it how could anyone not love this touching poem. You have a way with touching ot ...

Reviewed by Janmp

This is some really neat writing, Cleve. I think you and Juvie got your words all sorted and in fine order with this one. Thoughtful, loving and very ...

Reviewed by Char

I see you were inspiired by our Juvie to write this beautiful piece my friend. Well, you really have done her proud Cleve, for this is what life is al ...

Reviewed by John Henry

Excellent rhyming couplets mate, smooth and free flowing with a nice easy rhythm, it’s almost as if your pen has been given purpose… and I see you ...

Reviewed by Lonelyriver on Nov 26 2009


Many of us wend ourway along life's path but only the valiant are fortunate enough to have a lasting LOVE picked up along the way. Beautiful LOVE can ...

Reviewed by raymondo77

Bravo Cleve, you and Juvie did from a wonderful job here, a beautiful offering of a place in your heart for that someone special...a truly lovely read ...

Reviewed by Dee

A warm and welcoming piece you have here Cleve! A great rhyme and flow as well! It was a joy to read! Hugs & Love ~ Erin ...

Reviewed by EWMontgomery

Oh this is lovely and a great job of you two working together...so good that I read it a second time...smooth is this read too!awesome done...hugs...P ...

Reviewed by joeysgirl1 on Nov 22 2009

 
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